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I use to be here to release steam; in combination with my sophomoric superiority, I didn't care what any one had to say about it. I miss that honestly, that tenacious teenager that didn't give a damn. Things were so much simpler, the words also flowed of the tongue. Now an adult I'm so much more analytical about things, imbedded in logic and complex thought or theory, my mind is racing now. Ive found the words. This should still be my place to release steam. It is time to start writing again.

Tuesday, November 30, 2010

Rose and Jazmine poetry off; Break me down by Red

(lyrics)And there is nowhere left to hide, turn and face these empty eyes, all alone, heart untold, trying to find, Break me down. Replace this fear inside,, take this nothingness from me, I want to find,I want to shine, I want to rise, Break me down.

(Rose)For nothingness is never nothing, it's just a word to feel empty with. And the light we try to find will never shine in our direction, only darkness can break me down. Loneliness is all around. And I am so alone. So alone.

(jazmine)Alone I stand, no one around. Not one care in sight, Again i feel nothingness, feeling no other word to use, the only way to describe such a feeling as such. Light doesn't shine, till over the horizon the clouds part and i am full of anguish. I see the light, there is hope. Theres's always hope.

(Rose)Hope will revive my strength. It keeps my mind stable and my heart from imploding. It shows there will be something better. And someone better. The clouds will go away and all I'll see are better days. For not knowing where to turn, this is a pretty good start.

(Jazmine)Blindly i begin my journey, my pursuit for happiness. All focus on what's in store for a corrupted and broken heart. Trying to stay positive, but sometimes failing. I realize to move forward it must end, the thoughts of the past always bothering me bugging me telling me, you messed up, theres is no place of bliss for someone like you, someone who hurt others and had no re-guard for the well being of other's or yourself. I look ahead, up at the beautiful blue sky, realizing what i've done, i begin to change for the better. To save a broken soul, who doesn't want to fix a broken soul.

(Rose)No matter how I try, I cannot break free from this spell. Although there are remedies to treat it, I cannot break free. Everything goes in circles, he's always changing his mind, cursing myself with this spell. Who can I look up to now that I'm cursed? No one can save me now. This has gone on far enough. I will be strong. I will take over. I will let myself be. And I will be myself again.

(Pearl Jam lyrics) There's no need to hide. We're safe tonight.

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